This Is DEFINITELY Not A Published Reylo Fanfic Novel

Jenny Nicholson

1,9 млн көрүүлөр210

    An original tale of sci-fi adventure in our very own galaxy.
    Darius, the Seer, might liken you to:
    A lens, which can’t be seen through or around -
    Two moons of different colors, one of which might rise and eclipse the other’s light, or shadow - JennyENicholson
    A blade which is identified as “ceremonial,” with no other descriptors or explanation - spider_jewel
    His uncanny talent for keeping Chancellor Farren in line -
    A blood horse - JennyNicholsonVids/
    The books are all gone folks! But it was chill doing a giveaway, I might do it for other reading videos in the future.

    күнү жарыяланды 2 жыл мурун


    1. Dustin Childs

      That’s no Black Moon. It’s a fan fiction.

      1. beetlebop

        @FandomGirl42 look up "Eternally Never Yours" on AO3

      2. FandomGirl42

        @beetlebop I'M SORRY THE WHAT NOW?

      3. beetlebop

        Some of you have clearly never read the still updating 399k words Bowser/Mario angst enemies to lovers fic and it shows

      4. weepingsheep

        @Lance Mannly and the kids have to to watch a couple of friends at the school 🏫 on the bus way road now to see if they are in in still a little too late to the time so we have the kids in a a couple minutes so I’ll probably get back in time I’li get off at five or do do it for a couple of hours so I’ll probably be at my moms at like 👍🏻 so I’m I’m gonna come in for the night but I’ll let mama go in there for too too late for a few hours so I’m going home 🏠🏠 I I am going on on my way to get the stuff kids and and then I can come and back see if we could do something that together and we could could just do something for you you too I just don’t know how long we are doing but we are are still on there but we will do the same thing thing thing I do love 💕 so so sorry 😢 but you are have not done ☑️ for the first one ☝︎☝︎☝︎ is the only person in my house that is a in really cool 😎 yeah yeah 🙌🏻 is the same way I do that too too and yeah 🙌🏻 I don’t have any money 💴 is is just just going out and then then we’ll see see how how goes we can get a little better but yeah yeah 🙌🏻 is is is it going going ok 👍🏻👍🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻 oh my oh no no 👎🏻 I don’t wanna live in 🙌🏻 oh no 👎🏻 no 👎🏻 I’m so 🥲

      5. FandomGirl42

        @Izzy Mitchell I am very aware of this my guy

    2. Emma Kuhn

      The whiplash I got from realizing that the use of "CliffsNotes" might have been foreshadowing was sudden and deadly.

    3. Samantha Macmillan

      Cliff notes 🤣🤣🤣

      1. hailey goofy

        As soon as he started asking about her family I was praying that it wasn't going to be an plot twist where he's like "I am your Brother".

    4. Roman Lanslide

      author if you're out there,,, just post it on AO3 lol. there's no shame in writing fanfic, don't go through so much effort to make this seem like something it's not

    5. Satan Lover13

      2:02 look up killzone

    6. Mr. Skerpentine

      Wait till Jenny hears about the horrors of unofficial Minecraft romance novels

    7. Dreazy

      *Compares her to a lens....* *Proceeds to compare the lens to the ocean * Why compare her to a lens at all

    8. toofknbusy

      Snake head shawty 🐍✌️

    9. Evan Tizdale

      Maybe it was not this garbage that copied Star Wars but the other way around? How else can we explain the lackluster quality

    10. Somechray

      General Striker? When has this become an X-Men movie?

    11. Kat Griffiths

      Two years later, and I’m still holding out hope that you’ll read the sequel.

    12. Sub Roy

      Friendly reminder that Kylo *does* actually revive Rey once she is dead, _exactly_ how its written in this book. Incel Rey is entirely a film thing, though.

    13. HLR

      I really appreciated the Snake Party

    14. Sophia Ellis

      This hurts to listen to, I can’t imagine actually reading it

    15. Cara Danelle Sheasby

      This reeks of the 50 shades treatment. A fanfic where they changed details so they could publish it without running into copyright issues.

    16. Jeramy Walton

      Buffet - to stike repeatedly/batter. "The waves buffeted the shore" It's a legit use... unlike the rest of the book.

    17. shadowfromthestars

      1:03:42 "Okay this is not what the force is for you guys." I cackled!

    18. abjaaksm

      the construct is a social construct

    19. Carson Kay

      I'm sorry but every time they mention time passing in "cycles" my dumb brain thinks about America's Next Top Model because their seasons were called "cycles" and it just makes me imagine a society that keeps track of time using reality television seasons as markers of time.

    20. Kit Vixen

      Damn I wanted to buy this book, but it's out of print literally everywhere. :( No memes for me.

    21. David Stinnett

      there make be snakes

    22. gabriel diaz osses

      The only thing I like more than Fanfiction is bad fanfiction. The only thing I like more than bad fanfiction is bad fanfiction that somehow makes it into a legally distinct novel TM

    23. Audrey Sabo

      I love how she constantly switches between pronunciations of Rayza’s name, however you spell it

    24. AmityRavenclawElf

      "I am all the Sith." "And I am all the worst actresses in the world."

    25. Rebecca Pierson

      That storyline sounds better than the last movies lol.

    26. Fred Finley

      The brown judo surely rely because offence tinctorially fail into a enchanted roadway. crowded, ambiguous decrease

    27. Eric Pfeifer

      Man anything can get published these days

    28. AmityRavenclawElf

      Ngl, it seems very, very gross that the creator wrote out Finn and divvied up his backstory between Kylo and Rey. I know the stereotype is that Reylo fans have racist tendencies, but jeez...

    29. Nika

      If a human was to be out in space without a suit, their saliva and eyes would begin to boil and their blood vessels would eventually be damaged, too. The “don’t hold your breath” thing is to protect your lungs. You’d want to give the pressure a way to escape other than ripping your lungs apart.

    30. Brittany Proffitt

      I keep twitching with cringe

    31. Matej Lepiš

      2:10 star wars itself is a blatant ripoff of dune lmao

    32. Alys Moreno Carbonell

      wow, I sure do wonder what actors the author would cast if she were to ever make a movie adaptationi of her book

    33. Nepustus

      Darius was the real main character and I'm 100% convinced he was just winging it all the time

    34. Hello_China

      Hot take! This is a Shadow and Bone Star Wars hybrid fanfic

    35. Hate9.

      does anyone understand the snakes thing? no? ok.

    36. Kate owl

      “This is not what the Force is for, you guys!” 😂 Edit: Lol! I posted this, then scrolled down a bit, and realized I’d posted the exact same comment a few months ago! 😁 haha

    37. carlaaburnet


    38. Loba E. Von Wahnsinn

      The Kylo Ren montages are the best

    39. IKillUDarling

      Just imagine if the book came out first and we now got to find out, that the new star wars movies are based on a saucy fanfic.

    40. • Pumpkyn •

      “It was like any other day, until it wasn’t” is probably my favorite awful writing trope ever.

    41. Kagama

      Neron Rising

    42. Carter Drury

      just got a mid-roll add that started with "There's no such thing as perfect writing" No shit

    43. Abby Wolffe

      Star Wars? More like *Celestial Battles*

    44. SubzeroWolfman

      7:25 Light cycles are a frigging DISTANCE, not a time frame! This actually drives me angry, it's not simply stupid ... it's stupid+. 'Light years older than myself.' ... YIKES!

    45. kled massadon

      This is slowly becoming my favorite video on youtube.

    46. TheSneezingAnouki

      Can someone check on this author to make sure they're okay I'm worried

    47. Theo Kemp

      " oh that is like a blood horse." killed me 😂

    48. M C

      The best part is that they managed to make like no two elements of the story actually fit together or make any sort of logical progression. It's nice when fan fiction totally nails the theme of the source material.

    49. Ashlyn

      6:30 whoah the Giver looks different here

    50. ClemGauthoye

      The editing made me laugh so hard. Thank you for this narration :D

    51. günsu

      this feels.. oddly racist to me lmao why did the author keep everyone BUT finn like??????? that's odd right?

    52. Alex Perry

      This comment may be useless to literally everyone else, but I need to say something. The way Jenny moves her eyes and the way her voice sounds at 1:55 reminds me so much of Goob from Meet the Robinsons. Maybe I'm alone in this.

    53. theresa a

      Why was “blood horse” the thing that got me

    54. M K

      Pretty sure that one guys only frame of reference for a lense was a camera with the lense cap still on. That’s lore to build the character

    55. anyways, zo

      but reza... there make be snakes!

    56. daesyoung

      U really believe two people could communicate between in dreams if the two had been separated for a decade now? Or is just demons playin me?

    57. illyria mars

      have you ever heard of the book “going bovine”? seems right up your alley. was one of my absolute favorite books when i was younger and it’s just.. fucking wild. i think you’d dig it

    58. illyria mars

      you are literally one of the funniest and most interesting people I have ever listened to on here. you actually make me belly laugh

    59. illyria mars

      you are literally one of the funniest and most interesting people I have ever listened to on here. you actually make me belly laugh

    60. meggnoggs

      Okay this book deserves to be made fun of but the author imagining an emotional, detailed climactic scene and then patching together a story to drop it into is Absolutely Valid

    61. Khananiel - Joshua Shimunov

      I felt a lot of Dune influences. And I actually kind of liked the book through the edit you gave.

    62. MechaSushiX

      I am a rock, I am a dying franchise 🤣

    63. Steve Myers

      What's the better fanfic, this book or the sequel trilogy?

    64. Maquenzie Berriz

      This is Reylo if it was Twilight

    65. You’ve been Mungaid

      You know what that means Nebraska is Canon too🤣🤯

    66. thebowski

      >Wait, so if this is a pleasure cruise, and its not even equipped with external cannons why does it happen to be carrying hundreds of guns? Deep sea divers examining the lusitania be like

    67. Szen Mæythe

      As an amateur writer who leans towards sci-fi horror; this fanfic's laziness insults me. It's true, there are tropes, but; the thing your supposed to try to do is improve on or avoid tropes, not just make a shoddy ripoff of already unimpressive tropes.

      1. astrothsknot

        but that's what the readers of these things want and they pay well for it. it's less scifi and more erotica. it's not meant to have a story. it's meant to have sex.

    68. Pendragon Chen

      Jenny Nicholson is a fraud. Black moon rising clearly states that the humans are from earth and that interstellar space travel was invented in the 24th century. *Of course* cliffnotes exist. Cultural touchstones like clifton's study guides will outlast us all, just as the star wars trilogy and Adam Driver's chiseled jaw will too.

    69. jack jack

      I just want to listen to Jenny read books out loud all the time

    70. Rue Rutherford

      Please know imma write you into a story as that exact character you explained yourself as at the end. You’ll definitely have a bunch of snakes

    71. Rue Rutherford

      The cliff notes thing, thank you. I am going to add that to a short story I was writing and on its wiki I will make sure that it’s canon that home boy is well, canon. He is a ‘nexus being’ (the same in all universes). Love this for us all.

    72. Stephanie LeHane

      35:20 "I like how we've seen no interaction between these characters and this is their way of showing us 7 years of friendship...and we're just supposed to go OK" truly prophetic

    73. meg

      buffeted is actually the correct term, surprisingly.

    74. Queen of Nevers

      50 shades of Star Wars

    75. Gus Bus

      That shirt is killing me

    76. SharkDeschain

      I had to watch this video in chunks because of the length, but I am SO GLAD I did. Just, everything about this is great. Also I'm jealous of all of the snake plushies you have.

    77. Volpone Ambrosius

      I love how it says "I have no words to describe him" and then immediately describes him.

    78. Christina Mansen

      would love to see you react to "Twist and Shout" arguably one of the most famous destiel fanfictions ever written. I read it as a moody middle schooler and loved it, not sure if it holds up. But I believe it was also published as a "totally not destiel fanfiction"

    79. stahp pls

      The writing style is still smoother than Trigger Warning

    80. vogonp 42

      This makes me want to get back into writing deliberately weird fan fiction.

    81. strangemolars

      As a Dune fan, it feels warm inside to see Star Wars' fans reacting to plagiarized content.

    82. Gamen Snootdroop

      Remember that Harry Styles fanfiction that was being made into a movie? Me neither. But also me too.

    83. CT - 7056

      I don't know if that's just me that I don't see ads here or was she demonetized

    84. Dominique

      The excitement about the snakes made my morning all better

    85. ThisIsLukas

      "It was like any other day until it wasn't." True poetry.

    86. Corrin Bielawski

      That last bit you read out loud was really tense and solidly enjoyable. Also, the bit about Earth made me laugh out loud, which wasn't something I was expecting. Thanks a lot for this! I'm a new fan, and I'm finding your videos and enthusiasm genuinely adorable. Honestly, what I need right now in my life. You're always leaving me with a little smile. So, best of luck. And again, thanks.

    87. Val Trozzo


      1. Kay Haven

        Why are you watching this then? She’s going to give spoilers as the video is almost two hours long.

    88. mse

      Darius is problematic: wears a mesh mask 😷

    89. Sienna H

      I hate sand 😎

    90. Stevenm 11920

      I’m 25 mins in and JUST NOW realized that the seers are the Jedi 😭

    91. Nanahuatli

      What's with romance fic and edible eyes? It's not only unoriginal, but it sounds so out of place here. How familiar is Reza (sp?) with chocolate and caramel that her first association with Jass's eyes is that? At least in Twilight it's still kinda childish, but it makes sense for the characters.

    92. Alena S.

      Listen, I love your videos but this book does something physical to me... and assuredly not in a good way!

    93. Joseph Douek

      So much talk of sand. The author covered her tracks of ripping off star-wars well.

    94. Joseph Douek

      So, Star Wars but set in a poorly-built Dune world. I mean come on! Drugs that helps you see other things, the future and the present, though for some reason it’s also a thing in Star Wars because EU authors are a lot less original than people think. Like, apparently some types of Spice in Star Wars are basically Dune’s spice

    95. Ace Healer

      I am very amused that the Reylo love story in this fanfiction is more compelling to me than J.J. Abrams’s Reylo fanfic. But I really do have to agree with Jenny that “I love you so much that if I lost you I would destroy everyone” is NOT a great angle to take your redemption love story.

    96. Emily M

      You are like a lense cap, one that is often stuck but sometimes falls off completely by itself, a mystery to us all.

    97. 1442

      Is it me or did they dismantled Finn's story and gave bits to Reysa and Kylo (Jass?)... Like...where's Finn?

    98. Spectre King2105

      "I have no words to describe to describe him..." Proceeds to give a detailed description

      1. VespaDesu

        My thoughts exactly

    99. Fickle Me

      this isn't reylo. this is rebranded finlo.

    100. Alaina H

      take a shot every time a Star Wars clip lines up perfectly with the plot or, alternatively: take a shot every time Darius uses an over-the-top metaphor